Friday 1 November 2013

The Girl And The Ghost 1.11.13 Narrative



“Mary Luna, your daughter has been found doing strange things that scares other students, I am going to have to suspend her.” “but Mr Dundle!, my family has been to this school for generations!” “Yes Mary but unfortunately it has come to an end. You both may go.”
“Mummy, have I done something wrong?” “No Hannah, you’re fine.”
Mary and her daughter headed home, Mary was shocked, nobody in her family had ever been suspended from Lesters Westfield School, not until now. “Go play with Mr Snuggles, outside”
Yes mummy!” Hannah replied happily. Suddenly the phone rang. “Hello Mr Dundle, why have you called?, uha yes, but, ok.” Mary had been put into a real serious situation.
Hannah come on, were heading back to your old school.” There was no time to explain why they were heading back to Lesters.W School. “Mummy, I want to stop, mummy?” “No daughter we can’t,” “MUMMY!” Hannah kept on screaming for the rest of the ride but Mary wouldn’t stop. When they got there, Hannah was pulled out by her mother, “quite Hannah, you're okay.”
Suddenly MR Dundle was talking about what had happened with the other students when they went around Hannah. Finally they stopped, Mary realized what she had to do with her.
So they headed to Saint Christ Church, where Hannah had to be burnt. “AAAAHHHHH LET ME GOO! ARRRGHHH LET ME GOOO!” “Be a good girl for mummy,” Hannah was curious about what her mother was going to do. “You are not Hannah, WHO ARE YOU?” suddenly the curtains started running everywhere, and the glasses smashed. Mary got hit from a glass and fell down, her legs were both hurting. Hannah got up and held the ghost’s hand. “Lets go” Hannah said like nothing happened. “Hannah!” Mary started to crawl to her. But Hannah and the ghost walked into another room. The sun raised and Mary’s body disappeared, the police found no evidence and no little girl.

Hannah was never seen again

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