Monday 17 August 2015

Writing Progress - Term 3 Week 5

Writing Progress - Term 3 Week 5


In week 3 I started crafting my recount about a past experience during my child hood. It was based around me and my friend playing inside trolleys.


I see that my writing strengths are peering ideas together. Which means I am good at making my work link with each other. I know this because when I look back at my writing I can see that my work is linked up, especially with ideas. This is a good thing, but it does mean that I am not thinking out of the box. Or in another way I'm saying that my ideas aren't as big as they should be.

Reflecting on my current writing skills I think I need to work on making my sentences more interesting. If I can make my work interesting it means I am entertaining my audience which is an author's purpose when they are or when I am writing.

Thursday 13 August 2015

Term 3 Goals



WALT: Critically know our goals off by heart without needing them copied down or said to ourselves. My goals personally reflect on myself because they are the challenges that I need use to become the standard that has been provided. Scrolling through the slides, you will see the things that I struggle with and my weaknesses, but then you will also see my strengths that come and go.
 

Wednesday 12 August 2015

Trolley Recount - Past Experience



This recount is about a past experience that I experienced a few months ago. Me and my current best friend were bored during my mums shopping day so we decided to play around in the trolleys. This event happened to be a very memorable day for me and my best friend. I hope you enjoy and read the WHOLE presentation. Our WALT is to write a past experience relating to something we 'myself' did in our childhood. AKA(childhood memory.