WALT: Write a narrative story based on our art work.
A long time ago, way back in the days there was a new baby about to be born on earth. Her mum called her Bradley. But the sad thing was her mother died .Also there was a bad person named Jaxon he was as bulky as anyone could be because he was an evil spirit but no one knew him. He was as strong as hulk and mean as anyone could be. Also there was a beautiful daughter birthed by the same mother. But she was 19 years old. Her name was Jessie, she was as pretty as a flower and she smelt as pretty as the best thing that smelt nice in the world.
Ten years later they all were living happy but Bradley really badly wanted to know who her birth mother was but all she knew is that she was dead ,So one night Bradley and Jessie decided to sneak out side.No one knew that they were going to the grave yard,It was called the haunted graveyard. When they got to the haunted graveyard Bradley pointed and said ‘Ghost’.Then straight away she saw her mom's grave and then she rubbed the dust off and read the words out loud ‘Hear lies Sarah Jones RIP’. She saw that it was very old and dusty,But suddenly they heard voices. ‘Go away... ‘’You will be cursed,’Ah’. Both of the girls said and they ran but then somebody just jumped at front of them and they got a big fright,The man just grabbed Bradley and scared her. He said with a big voice ‘Don’t move or I'll scare her’. Then Jessie said give her back’. Then he said ‘ I am the evil spirit that will curse you’ ‘so i am going to curse you with pain so go away or I’ll kill one of you girlies’. Then Jesse called the cops but there was no service so she told him ‘Give my sister and we will leave’. So he set her free and just disappeared,Then with excitement he closed the gate when they went out.
After that Jessie and Bradley went home.Jessie helped Bradley with her bandage so her hand could get better. Then Bradley said ‘That was close’‘Go to bed.Jesse answered ‘OK. Bradley said.Then she went to bed and dreamed about what she would do with her mum if she was alive.And Bradley and Jessie learnt a lesson to never go to that graveyard again.
Ten years later they all were living happy but Bradley really badly wanted to know who her birth mother was but all she knew is that she was dead ,So one night Bradley and Jessie decided to sneak out side.No one knew that they were going to the grave yard,It was called the haunted graveyard. When they got to the haunted graveyard Bradley pointed and said ‘Ghost’.Then straight away she saw her mom's grave and then she rubbed the dust off and read the words out loud ‘Hear lies Sarah Jones RIP’. She saw that it was very old and dusty,But suddenly they heard voices. ‘Go away... ‘’You will be cursed,’Ah’. Both of the girls said and they ran but then somebody just jumped at front of them and they got a big fright,The man just grabbed Bradley and scared her. He said with a big voice ‘Don’t move or I'll scare her’. Then Jessie said give her back’. Then he said ‘ I am the evil spirit that will curse you’ ‘so i am going to curse you with pain so go away or I’ll kill one of you girlies’. Then Jesse called the cops but there was no service so she told him ‘Give my sister and we will leave’. So he set her free and just disappeared,Then with excitement he closed the gate when they went out.
After that Jessie and Bradley went home.Jessie helped Bradley with her bandage so her hand could get better. Then Bradley said ‘That was close’‘Go to bed.Jesse answered ‘OK. Bradley said.Then she went to bed and dreamed about what she would do with her mum if she was alive.And Bradley and Jessie learnt a lesson to never go to that graveyard again.
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Hi Chardonnay I like your story about the Journey of life it was so amazing Bf. :)
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