Another Planet Narrative

There once was another earth that nobody knew about, this is the story about a person who lives in that other planet.

I am Una, I live on Planet. I have just discovered that there is another planet, which means that we aren't the only ones who are here in Space.

I have searched all I can in our Finding Search books. I’m only young so there is nothing I can really do. “Hello mum, I have some incredible news.” My mum’s name is Jupiter, we don’t have last names like the other planet which I don’t mind because I’m use to it.

“We don’t have time for this Una” I walk outside like we usually do, the moon is shining in the sunlight like it usually does. I wonder how it feels like to have a sun! Because the other Planet does.

It’s been a few days and I really can’t get Earth out of my mind.

“Earth is powerful.” I always say to Jupiter. She won’t believe me!

There now is a warning, saying that the world is going to end,

I wonder what will happen to us. I try not to worry myself so I say we are going to Earth.

Did you know that we some kind of bubble around us, were lucky that it’s see-through, all of us can always see space. Jupiter calls me in for food.

Now it’s night time, the whole world is shaking so I walk out and sit on the tree.

Planet is beautiful, I can see huge rocks coming towards us, (Planet only moves when that happens so I don’t mind) The moon is close up to us. I stare, I realize that me and Jupiter’s eyes are the same colour as the moon.

I have been here for a few days. I’m deciding to leave Planet and go to Earth but I can’t make my decision.  The moon is shining very hard that the water has turned it’s colour, (sometimes I think that the moon is going to kill us, me and Jupiter)

Suddenly I make my decision. I leave a note saying my farewells to Jupiter and head to the water.  It is very cold, the moon starts to reflect on myself.

I start to sink, my eyes gleam under the water as I swim.

FINALLY!

I’m at the end of Planet, I can just fit through the holes that the water comes through.

I fall, fear flows through my vein. Something is on moon putting a flag there.

Is that earth? I get very dizzy, the thing comes towards me.

NO! Planet is gone, where is it? The thing grabs me.

“NO!” I scream. I turn around and fall on a star. I grip hold onto it.

I run out of air, I resolve into dust.

My last words spit out. “Jupiter” the thing hears me.