Writing Progress - Term 3 Week 5

Writing Progress - Term 3 Week 5

In week 3 I started crafting my recount about a past experience during my child hood. It was based around me and my friend playing inside trolleys.

I see that my writing strengths are peering ideas together. Which means I am good at making my work link with each other. I know this because when I look back at my writing I can see that my work is linked up, especially with ideas. This is a good thing, but it does mean that I am not thinking out of the box. Or in another way I'm saying that my ideas aren't as big as they should be.

Reflecting on my current writing skills I think I need to work on making my sentences more interesting. If I can make my work interesting it means I am entertaining my audience which is an author's purpose when they are or when I am writing.

Term 3 Goals

WALT: Critically know our goals off by heart without needing them copied down or said to ourselves. My goals personally reflect on myself because they are the challenges that I need use to become the standard that has been provided. Scrolling through the slides, you will see the things that I struggle with and my weaknesses, but then you will also see my strengths that come and go.
 

Trolley Recount - Past Experience

This recount is about a past experience that I experienced a few months ago. Me and my current best friend were bored during my mums shopping day so we decided to play around in the trolleys. This event happened to be a very memorable day for me and my best friend. I hope you enjoy and read the WHOLE presentation. Our WALT is to write a past experience relating to something we 'myself' did in our childhood. AKA(childhood memory.

My Term 3 Goals

These are my writing, reading and maths goals for term 3,
Thank you for reading.

Turning Solids To Liquids To Solids Experiment.

How to turn Something from Solid to Liquid to Solid.

With our experiment we we're aiming to turn solid to liquid to solid.

The ingredients are:

• Raro

• 1 Jug
• Ice Block sticks
• Wooden Spoon
• Water
• Cups

Method:

Step 1.. Open your raro packet.

Step 2.. Poor the raro packet into the jug.

Step 3..  Add water into the jug.

Step 4..  Use the wooden spoon and mix it all together until it dissolves.

Step 5.. Pour the liquid into your cups.

Step 6.. Add Ice block sticks into the cups.

Step 7.. Put the cups into the freezer.

Step 8.. Wait until it has turned into a solid and then you can eat your ice block!!

Conclusion:

When you put the liquid into the cold temperature it turns it into a solid and that is how we made solid turn into liquid and then it turned back into solid.